bluSake, you always create something special. In this case, I sense a
traditional feel that is really hard to do. The mixture of textures only provide
a soothing sensation which adds to the greatness of this wall.
I have a question though. Why is there a symbol of "wind" in the
title?
I've yet to watch Aria but this wall invites me to. As for the comments, I
really liked how you made the sky. It creates a concept for the sky being
something painted. If you look at the real sky carefully, it seems painted (at
least from my perspective).
The extraction is great and the placement is not cliche. Moreover, the character
suits pastel perfectly.
Overall, I like this wallpaper. I'll be anticipating your future works.
I like the painting-ish feeling that this wall emanates. The textures are this
wall's best parts. Every single one of them contributes to the overall
impression.
If I were to say something bad about this, it would be the small moon that I
don't really understand; it's not quite round.
Absolutely gorgeous! This wall creates a wonderful atmosphere because of the
excellent placement of textures. The line style captured the traditional feel of
the art. Her kimono looks pretty. Above all, the lips look wonderful.
Hello Kiako. Nice to see you submitting walls. I like the title. I'm thinking
that the overall effect of this title involves mystery. I also like it.
In terms of the character size, perhaps she's too small. Small is ok but there
aren't much objects to cover the wall. A big space of your wallie is blank.
Maybe a sky could do well there if you don't plan to enlarge the others. The red
swirl around her is kinda pixelly in some parts. Try to work on that.
I hope that you'll update this wall. You already have a nice concept. Give the
wall more details to back it up.
I may be a *little* too late to comment but I still want to.
I especially like the way her motion is represented. It's quite unique and the
way you blended them resulted to more shades. Details are always nice to have.
Accessories are plus points.
As for negative comments, her right foot is too thin, at least on the main
vector. The ones on the shades are fine.
Wow! The cockpit was made from scratch? I would have never guessed it. It looks
that professional. The vectors are crisp. I really can't see any bad edges
unless you didn't intend some of them to be disfigured.
Overall, this wallpaper is unique and stylish. I look forward to seeing more of
your submissions in the near future.
Speed Grapher really does have a special art. I'm glad that you sort of
highlighted that aspect. The grunge part is as expected; it's great. I
especially like the dots over the wall.
I can't really say anything bad about this wall. Keep up the good
work.
The vectors are clean. It's certainly a plus factor that you did cloud overlays
and stuff to it. The clouds look realistic. It must have taken you a lot of
time.
As much as I like your concept, the placing of the girl in a cloud without even
bending a little seems awkward. All your colors have a very light earthish tone
so the darkness of some parts of her earring is distracting.
Overall, this wall generates Nimya's character well. I like it. Good
job.
Sorry but there's a whole lot of room for improvements for this wallie.
Before saying all that, I would like you to at least contact the person who made
the vector and ask his/her permission first before submitting. I'm not even sure
if what you're doing right now is not against the rules of MT. After, please
credit him/her in the description.
The extraction of the vector is worse than desired. There are actually lots of
white or blue "leftovers" in your extraction. Graphics and idea makes
this wall decent at best. I hope that you'll learn a lot with this wallie...
It's certainly what counts in wallpaper making.
Edit: Oh and I like the seal and the fire thingy too.
When I first saw the scan, it seemed to have sort of a dirty touch in it.
However, you were able to alter its meaning with this wallpaper. Good
work.
The vectors are crisp as always and the Ai Yazawa's character designs are given
much highlight. The elements of this wall are fit with the theme, infatuation. A
proof would be that it contains the bubbly yet sinking feeling felt during
infatuation.
I LOVE the the floor. Especially the carpet and cup of tea. The whole oil
painting effect was really suited there.
However, there's something about how she's holding the broom that is like a
glitch. Her right cheek (left when we're looking) that's a bit pixel-y. Would
you mind fixing those details?
Still, I like this wall's originality and concept. +fave
Beautiful Sama! I like the way her eyes stand out. Still, the extraction is not
perfect (I see some excess whites on her hair). The balcony walls (?) don't look
"real".
I see that you're finally regaining your touch. I'll be waiting for your next
wallpapers.
I like the concept of your wall. It seems relaxing and the color of her hair
stands out since red contrasts with blue so much.
However, this wall is still almost the same as your other works, not random
enough. Sure you have classified the snow from the snowflakes and added about
3-6 varieties of it. Still, snowflakes and snow falling from the sky aren't
falling from the same angle and aren't of the same size. Experiment with the
brush options more.
Still, the wall is beautiful and I think that it's one of your best works yet.
It's a cute wallpaper. I can feel pop-up-ishness in this wallie. However, it's
still not perfect. The white edges of the characters are pixely... Try erasing
small parts of the edges to make it blend more or use the "feather" in
your "selection".
Concept is *quite* unique. I like it. However, this wallpaper still has lots of
areas to improve on.
Most importantly, the scan you used is really of bad quality. Resized maybe? If
you could vector it or fix it somehow, this will be ok. The wall is too light
and I see no sense of putting the rays of light. Hopefully, you'll update this
wall.
I hope that you have saved a psd file because I have lots of suggestions for
this wallpaper. ^^
First of all, the whole wallpaper is only of one hue. Make the colors of the
rose stand out. Make the rose crimson red. Kurama isn't pink so use his original
colors but do some other changes for it to mesh with the color of the
background. Add hue and brightness jitters to the petals so there will be
variety.
Do some brushing. All-filter walls are not good. Find some grungy brushes and
some petal brushes that would suit this wall.
Also, it's too bright. Lower the saturation and do some other stuff to make it
easier to the eyes
I see good potential in this wallpaper. Hope you fix this and make it blossom.
Sorry Idril, I agree with Shinn, Limality and nekosasu. I'm not a good wallpaper
maker yet but I hope that you'd also read this comment.
I really really like your concept. However, the color of the girl and the black
sky with lightning of all things just don't match. It could've better if you
used something light like a sunny sky raining or a cloudy sky. Extraction needs
improvement. You can already see some excess white stuff on the right part of
the girl. Everything extracted needs more work too. The bubbles should be more
random. Erase the first or both of some bubble pairs to make it more random.
Since I've already told you about the color issues, perhaps you would lower the
saturation. Make everything wooden, the sky, and the plants lighter too so it
would fit the color of the girl.
Ending this post, I would like to say that hopefully some of your future works
will be in the popular submissions category. Bye
It's a really clean vector, kai. You even managed to put in a LOT of detail. That must have been really hard work. The line art suits the scan well.
Overall, great job. May your future works be a whole lot better.
bluSake, you always create something special. In this case, I sense a traditional feel that is really hard to do. The mixture of textures only provide a soothing sensation which adds to the greatness of this wall.
I have a question though. Why is there a symbol of "wind" in the title?
I don't exactly like Rukia as a character but this wallpaper is stunning. Simplicity at its best.
This is definitely one of the most unique walls out there.
I've yet to watch Aria but this wall invites me to. As for the comments, I really liked how you made the sky. It creates a concept for the sky being something painted. If you look at the real sky carefully, it seems painted (at least from my perspective).
The extraction is great and the placement is not cliche. Moreover, the character suits pastel perfectly.
Overall, I like this wallpaper. I'll be anticipating your future works.
I like the painting-ish feeling that this wall emanates. The textures are this wall's best parts. Every single one of them contributes to the overall impression.
If I were to say something bad about this, it would be the small moon that I don't really understand; it's not quite round.
Absolutely gorgeous! This wall creates a wonderful atmosphere because of the excellent placement of textures. The line style captured the traditional feel of the art. Her kimono looks pretty. Above all, the lips look wonderful.
Hello Kiako. Nice to see you submitting walls. I like the title. I'm thinking that the overall effect of this title involves mystery. I also like it.
In terms of the character size, perhaps she's too small. Small is ok but there aren't much objects to cover the wall. A big space of your wallie is blank. Maybe a sky could do well there if you don't plan to enlarge the others. The red swirl around her is kinda pixelly in some parts. Try to work on that.
I hope that you'll update this wall. You already have a nice concept. Give the wall more details to back it up.
Wow. This wall is just screaming originality. Really nice vectors and textures you have there. The little piano looks cute. Basically, it rocks.
There's nothing bad to say about this wallie. Keep up the good work.
I may be a *little* too late to comment but I still want to.
I especially like the way her motion is represented. It's quite unique and the way you blended them resulted to more shades. Details are always nice to have. Accessories are plus points.
As for negative comments, her right foot is too thin, at least on the main vector. The ones on the shades are fine.
Wow! The cockpit was made from scratch? I would have never guessed it. It looks that professional. The vectors are crisp. I really can't see any bad edges unless you didn't intend some of them to be disfigured.
Overall, this wallpaper is unique and stylish. I look forward to seeing more of your submissions in the near future.
Speed Grapher really does have a special art. I'm glad that you sort of highlighted that aspect. The grunge part is as expected; it's great. I especially like the dots over the wall.
I can't really say anything bad about this wall. Keep up the good work.
The vectors are clean. It's certainly a plus factor that you did cloud overlays and stuff to it. The clouds look realistic. It must have taken you a lot of time.
As much as I like your concept, the placing of the girl in a cloud without even bending a little seems awkward. All your colors have a very light earthish tone so the darkness of some parts of her earring is distracting.
Overall, this wall generates Nimya's character well. I like it. Good job.
Sorry but there's a whole lot of room for improvements for this wallie.
Before saying all that, I would like you to at least contact the person who made the vector and ask his/her permission first before submitting. I'm not even sure if what you're doing right now is not against the rules of MT. After, please credit him/her in the description.
The extraction of the vector is worse than desired. There are actually lots of white or blue "leftovers" in your extraction. Graphics and idea makes this wall decent at best. I hope that you'll learn a lot with this wallie... It's certainly what counts in wallpaper making.
Edit: Oh and I like the seal and the fire thingy too.
When I first saw the scan, it seemed to have sort of a dirty touch in it. However, you were able to alter its meaning with this wallpaper. Good work.
The vectors are crisp as always and the Ai Yazawa's character designs are given much highlight. The elements of this wall are fit with the theme, infatuation. A proof would be that it contains the bubbly yet sinking feeling felt during infatuation.
I LOVE the the floor. Especially the carpet and cup of tea. The whole oil painting effect was really suited there.
However, there's something about how she's holding the broom that is like a glitch. Her right cheek (left when we're looking) that's a bit pixel-y. Would you mind fixing those details?
Still, I like this wall's originality and concept. +fave
Beautiful Sama! I like the way her eyes stand out. Still, the extraction is not perfect (I see some excess whites on her hair). The balcony walls (?) don't look "real".
I see that you're finally regaining your touch. I'll be waiting for your next wallpapers.
I like the concept of your wall. It seems relaxing and the color of her hair stands out since red contrasts with blue so much.
However, this wall is still almost the same as your other works, not random enough. Sure you have classified the snow from the snowflakes and added about 3-6 varieties of it. Still, snowflakes and snow falling from the sky aren't falling from the same angle and aren't of the same size. Experiment with the brush options more.
Still, the wall is beautiful and I think that it's one of your best works yet.
It's a cute wallpaper. I can feel pop-up-ishness in this wallie. However, it's still not perfect. The white edges of the characters are pixely... Try erasing small parts of the edges to make it blend more or use the "feather" in your "selection".
Concept is *quite* unique. I like it. However, this wallpaper still has lots of areas to improve on.
Most importantly, the scan you used is really of bad quality. Resized maybe? If you could vector it or fix it somehow, this will be ok. The wall is too light and I see no sense of putting the rays of light. Hopefully, you'll update this wall.
I hope that you have saved a psd file because I have lots of suggestions for this wallpaper. ^^
First of all, the whole wallpaper is only of one hue. Make the colors of the rose stand out. Make the rose crimson red. Kurama isn't pink so use his original colors but do some other changes for it to mesh with the color of the background. Add hue and brightness jitters to the petals so there will be variety.
Do some brushing. All-filter walls are not good. Find some grungy brushes and some petal brushes that would suit this wall.
Also, it's too bright. Lower the saturation and do some other stuff to make it easier to the eyes
I see good potential in this wallpaper. Hope you fix this and make it blossom.
It has a very simplistic elegance in it but somehow it feels missing. I love your concept and will definitely miss your submissions. +fav
Like the rest of your wallpapers, this wallpaper is amazing. The textures made me love it. However, maybe it's too big... +fav still though.
Sorry Idril, I agree with Shinn, Limality and nekosasu. I'm not a good wallpaper maker yet but I hope that you'd also read this comment.
I really really like your concept. However, the color of the girl and the black sky with lightning of all things just don't match. It could've better if you used something light like a sunny sky raining or a cloudy sky. Extraction needs improvement. You can already see some excess white stuff on the right part of the girl. Everything extracted needs more work too. The bubbles should be more random. Erase the first or both of some bubble pairs to make it more random. Since I've already told you about the color issues, perhaps you would lower the saturation. Make everything wooden, the sky, and the plants lighter too so it would fit the color of the girl.
Ending this post, I would like to say that hopefully some of your future works will be in the popular submissions category. Bye